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Joshua Lavender's avatar

John, I love your metaphor of animals as "barometers" for their human companions at the end of the essay. I quite agree, though with amendment. Humans -- or, for you, humanoids -- are the main characters in our stories, so we tend to think of barometers of one kind or another as storytelling tools (like the objective correlative). However, when I tell a story with an animal character, I try to bear in mind that animals are living beings in their own right with their own distinct personalities. I can use it to gloss what humans are thinking, feeling, or doing, but not only to gloss. The animal has a mind of its own, agency, and it can venture off-script, defying the humans' expectations of it. I think this is an important rule for writing realistically with animal characters.

So far, my novel Quibble has featured a horse, a silver gyrfalcon, and a wolf. Later, a raven will make a cameo appearance. In my favorite "animal" chapter, the wolf Clarity plays the role of peacemaker between two sparring humans: https://singulardream.substack.com/p/quibble-chapter-45

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Jessica Maison's avatar

Yes! Great piece on animals in writing.

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