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Dustin's avatar

Agreed, John. I love your examples, too. They're just interesting enough to intrigue the reader. They intrigued me, anyway.

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John Coon's avatar

Thank you! I always look at a first line as a teaser to the broader story rather than the hinge point on which the whole story hangs.

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Dustin's avatar

That is an interesting way of looking at ir!🙂

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