Thanks. I always try my hardest to keep the logic consistent with time-travel stories. I don't like it when the protagonist alters the timeline and seemingly remains unchanged while everything else changes around them.
My story took root in enduring pets disappearing over the years and wishing I could replay the last day I saw those sweet little friends and take actions to prevent them from vanishing.
Nice story John 👍🏼
That’s the danger with time travel. When would you stop trying to “fix” things ? 🤔
That's always a dilemma I love exploring with time travel stories. We want to change the past, but our experiences shape who we are in the present.
Nice causality loop story. Well done.
Thank you! 😊
Time travel stories are always tricky to execute and still have the internal logic and rules make sense.
Smart fiction ... lovely stuff
Thank you.😊
That was good. I had a hunch of the twist.
Thanks. I always try my hardest to keep the logic consistent with time-travel stories. I don't like it when the protagonist alters the timeline and seemingly remains unchanged while everything else changes around them.
...I’m not crying. Damn onion ninjas..
They strike without mercy.
I'm really depressed now.
My story took root in enduring pets disappearing over the years and wishing I could replay the last day I saw those sweet little friends and take actions to prevent them from vanishing.