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Nice story John 👍🏼

That’s the danger with time travel. When would you stop trying to “fix” things ? 🤔

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That's always a dilemma I love exploring with time travel stories. We want to change the past, but our experiences shape who we are in the present.

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Smart fiction ... lovely stuff

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Thank you.😊

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That was good. I had a hunch of the twist.

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Thanks. I always try my hardest to keep the logic consistent with time-travel stories. I don't like it when the protagonist alters the timeline and seemingly remains unchanged while everything else changes around them.

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...I’m not crying. Damn onion ninjas..

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They strike without mercy.

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