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L Dacre Tynan @Elbow_Jumper's avatar

Nice poem, John. I don't comment often but enjoy everything you write. ^_^

Take care, keep writing!

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John Coon's avatar

Thank you! I appreciate the kind words.

Feel free to comment as often as you like. 😊

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Jon T's avatar

Great word shapes in this John, and cool thematic. I always thought that if you could travel in the future it was a one way ticket and no one could ever come meet you there because you essentially split off on your timeline.

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John Coon's avatar

Yeah, I think you'd encounter a host of existential problems with travel to the distant future. Your family and friends would be dead. Everything comfortable and familiar would be long forgotten by history. I imagine it would be a little like an ancient Egyptian showing up in 21st century America.

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Daniel O’Donnell's avatar

This is really great, John 👍🏼

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